Sample: Creative Presentation

Scoring Criteria

Creative Presentation	Exploration of the Concept	Communication of Point of View	Quality of Presentation
	The student...
5 Excellent	provides a thorough exploration	communicates persuasively engages the audience passionately makes highly effective use of the medium	creates a powerful and convincing presentation, generally free of errors
4 Proficient	provides a clear and skillful exploration	communicates convincingly engages the audience successfully makes effective use of the medium	creates a clear and fluent presentation, with few errors
3 Satisfactory	provides a straightforward exploration	communicates conventionally engages the audience generally makes a satisfactory use of the medium	creates an adequate, conventional presentation, with some errors
2 Limited	provides a simple exploration	communicates tentatively engages the audience occasionally makes some use of the medium	creates a simple presentation, with numerous errors
1 Poor	provides a vague exploration	communicates unclearly loses the attention of the audience makes ineffective use of the medium	creates a confused presentation with errors that hinder understanding

12/15

Comment: An original and refreshing presentation! You have shown clearly and effectively how hockey has influenced you . However, you could have provided more detail about how globalization is a part of this whole process. For instance, what happens when hockey players have to move to other parts of the world to play? Does that change the values in any way? Does it change the values of the players? What about the media? Hockey is shown throughout the world on satellite television. Does that mean that hockey values can be spread around the world? Is it also possible that the values of the corporations broadcasting or advertising hockey become part of the game? And what does all that have to do with your identity?