Publishing Your Report

Step Five: Revise and Edit


When you complete the first draft of the report, think of an appropriate but attention-getting title. For example, “Choosing a Dog” indicates the topic but does little to spark the reader’s interest. Instead, the writer could write “Dogged by Indecision? Here’s How to Choose a Dog Wisely.”

Take time to revise and edit. Revising and editing your work is time well spent! This involves major changes such as re-organizing paragraphs and re-writing sentences.

Revise for the following aspects: 

  1. Focus on the three elements of good writing:  coherence, unity, and emphasis (review this lesson if needed)
Always review your work to ensure the topic has been covered thoroughly. Ask yourself, “What did I miss?” or “What can I add?” Think carefully about whether you have achieved your purpose clearly with the topic.


  1. How ideas are presented can be as significant as the ideas themselves. Diction or word choice should always be appropriate to the topic, purpose, and audience. A report is a formal piece of writing that never uses slang, contractions, or colloquialisms.

  1. Proofread your work carefully for spelling and grammatical errors. Taking a break between revising and proofreading is always advisable so that your brain does not supply missing or repeated words.

   Use the Revision Checklist to review/revise your own work NOW.



Editing and Proofreading Strategies


  • Peer Editing:  Have a student or peer provide feedback about how you can improve your work. Offer to be a peer editor for someone else in the future.

  • Reading from the Bottom Up:  Sometimes your brain becomes so familiar with what you wrote that it develops “blind spots” in which you miss errors that are obvious to others. A great way to catch mistakes is to start reading from the last sentence to the first. Focus on one sentence at a time and finding errors or typos is easier.
  • Consulting a Writer’s Handbook or a Dictionary: Handbooks help you with your writing. They can help you restructure sentences or revise your choices of words. Use a thesaurus for alternate words with similar meanings to pursue your main topic. This enables you to maintain your focus with various words rather than repetition of one key word. This variety helps to make your writing interesting to the reader.





Steps for you to take at this stage of creating your report:

  1.   Revise your report yourself, to make it the best you can on your own.
  2.    Have someone else peer review and edit your re-written version, to make it even better. Ask your reviewer to use this review document:  Research Report Revision Checklist




Step Six: Publish Your Report




    
When you have reviewed the feedback on the completed Research Report Revision Checklist, revise and proofread your report one more time.


   When you have finished creating your report, go to Assignment 4-3  and complete Sections 2 & 3.



When you have completed all parts of Assignment 4-3,

    • be sure you have renamed your file (YOURNAME) la 9-4-3
    • upload the completed assignment into the Assignment 4-3 file on the next page
Check in a few days to retrieve the marked assignment and review the feedback from your teacher.