5.4.6 A Tip about Thesis Statements



Think about thesis statements as a set of directions. We establish the direction of every discussion right away so people understand how to follow ideas and respond. We can do this in a very specific way (some theses are quite complex and detailed) or in a general way.

A thesis statement always identifies the subject or topic and how it will be discussed.

  1. What is your subject or topic? What statement did you develop to answer the essay prompt?

  2. How will you arrange your ideas? What vehicle will you use to discuss your topic? What references will you use? In your personal response, you will use your chosen graphic novel as well as personal experience. When writing your thesis, you will name the text and its author, and you will identify your personal experiences in a general way when talking about how you will speak about your topic.

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  • Sample General Thesis Statement:

    "People do not benefit from our help if they have not asked for our involvement.

    References or Supporting Details:
    Personal experience: I helped my grandmother and my best friend.
    Literature: "The Wedding Guest" by Lois Simmie

    I will explore the idea in my thesis statement through my personal experiences of helping others, as well as the text "The Wedding Guest" by Lois Simmie.

  • Sample Specific Thesis Statement:

    People may not immediately realize the benefit of our help, especially if they have not asked for our involvement; however, the future generally provides a different, appreciative perspective.

    References or Supporting Details:
    Personal experience: I babysat my naughty nephew.
    Literature: "The Wedding Guest" by Lois Simmie

    I will explore my thesis through personal experience with a stubborn child, as well as the text "The Wedding Guest", by Lois Simmie.