Unit 3

How Does the Human Body Work?

Mini-Lesson

Writing Revision

The Writing Process


Open the Reference Poster: The Writing Process and take a look at the Rethink and Revise box. Think about how revision fits into the writing process.

Revision is about:

  • rereading and reviewing a piece of writing to identify elements that need improvement
  • using feedback from the teacher and peers
  • making changes and adjustments to improve the content, clarity and interest of written work

It requires you to think reflectively about the piece of writing.
     
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Some tips you can use when revising your writing include:

  • read a section to someone else for suggestions
  • use arrows and symbols to rearrange ideas
  • use a coloured pen to add specific vocabulary or details

OR if you are using a word processor

  • change the font colour to add specific details or vocabulary
  • use the copy, cut, and paste function to move things around
  • use the highlight function if you are unsure about some information

Your presentation is done. It is ready to be handed in STOP!

Have you checked over your presentation? Using a checklist like the one below will make your writing the best it can be.


Revision Checklist

I have:

  • reworked ideas to match purpose and intended audience
  • organized information logically
  • made sure my message has a consistent voice and point of view
  • used strong words and descriptive language to add interest
  • used a variety of sentence types and lengths