ELA2104-ABED: 4.5 Polished Visual Response

Assignment Instructions

Read through the tabs for this assignment before you begin your work. Contact your teacher if you have any questions or would like help.

1. Re-visit your assessed 4.45 Revised Rough Draft.

2. Use suggestions from your teacher on that assignment to write your polished Visual Response.

3. Prepare and submit a polished copy of your visual response and complete the paragraph activity and the editing checklist with your work (see "worksheet" tab). You may choose a written or oral format for your response. Read suggestions in the 'student examples & help' tab to assist you in completing this assignment.

4. Save your polished work as 4_5_polished_visual_response and submit it for assessment.

To complete the 4.5 Polished Visual Response download one of the worksheets below (the checklist is included).

worksheet (Word)
worksheet (PDF)
worksheet (Google Doc)

Click the 4.5 Polished Visual Response Assessment to see how your work will be assessed.

Helpful Suggestions for Written Work
The following points may be helpful to consider when putting your final draft for this assignment together.

After writing your draft, take a break and edit your work later.

Edit your work using a different coloured pen. Consider any revisions or re-wording (spelling, typos, grammar, word choice, etc.) to improve the effectiveness of your response.

Verbal Presentations of Written Work
If you consider the option of sharing your polished essay verbally, you may find these suggestions helpful

Use the “rough draft” pages of the workbook to organize your oral presentation.

Before delivering your oral presentation for marking, practice speaking it aloud several times.

Have your notes and visual in front of you when speaking.

A speaking “map” indicating your order of talking points with evidence for each on or beside the visual may help you stay organized.

Use the following types of media to submit this assignment version: an audio file to submit on a memory card, CD, or USB drive, a podcast on Spreaker, a URL or sound file from Vocaroo, etc.

Student Example of Polished Visual Response
Select the following link to view Hailey’s 4.5 Visual Response.

After completing the checklist and polished copy of the visual response, give a copy of it to another person to edit and make notes and suggestions on the copy. Submit these edits with your final written work.